domingo, 13 de junho de 2010

De Dominic Tomassetti (3)

The pearls were your eyes, see

how they slide on the humid cloth

Every time you see me

will be as first

Nothing compares to this moment

Nothing will ever be the same

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You should fear death by water

The water comes and takes you

You’ll see your body dissolve

and you’ll be part of the ocean

watering so many flowers

carelessly filling so many pots

You should fear the water

as your fifth element

The enemy inside of you

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Multitudes walk in circle

and I feel easy as I see you by the window

looking at them as they go by

Everything moves under our unbelieving eyes

as our faces were molded

by the salt of the ebb tide

You look different now

Like a stranger

before death masks

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Multitudes walk in [circle]

Multitudes walk in circles

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In the American language circle should read “circles” – going round and round.

Next, using “by” twice one word is right above the other and the lines would probably read better as

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and I feel easy as I see you [by] the window

looking at them as they go [by]

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and I feel easy as I see you near the window

looking at them as they go by

*

4 July 2000

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